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From: Ralf Thielow <ralf.thielow@gmail.com>
To: Stefan Beller <sbeller@google.com>
Cc: "git@vger.kernel.org" <git@vger.kernel.org>,
	"Hartmut Henkel" <henkel@vh-s.de>,
	"Thomas Rast" <tr@thomasrast.ch>, "Jan Krüger" <jk@jk.gs>,
	"Christian Stimming" <stimming@tuhh.de>,
	"Phillip Szelat" <phillip.szelat@gmail.com>,
	"Matthias Rüster" <matthias.ruester@gmail.com>,
	"Magnus Görlitz" <magnus.goerlitz@googlemail.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] l10n: de.po: various fixes in German translation
Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2017 20:06:04 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <CAN0XMO+qdTQZe=7L6MZqn1_7V48tN-o3rHqhoywmApdrva6QjA@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <CAGZ79kYWhaUUWviq2Kx4h+dEEfRkE8JjGa=JUq6b1Vd8ZUWa9w@mail.gmail.com>

2017-07-27 20:00 GMT+02:00 Stefan Beller <sbeller@google.com>:
> This patch looks good to me, but some unrelated comments
> that I feel would improve the translation even more.
>
> Thanks,
> Stefan
>
>> @@ -1465,7 +1465,7 @@ msgstr "Konnte '%s' nicht aufheben."
>>
>>  #: connect.c:50
>>  msgid "The remote end hung up upon initial contact"
>> -msgstr "Die Gegenseite hat sich nach dem erstmaligen Kontakt aufgehangen."
>> +msgstr "Die Gegenseite hat nach dem erstmaligen Kontakt abgebrochen."
>
> erstmalig reads funny here. Maybe "ersten" instead?
>
>
>> @@ -3360,7 +3360,7 @@ msgstr "gespeicherte \"pre-cherry-pick\" HEAD Datei '%s' ist beschädigt"
>>  #: sequencer.c:1658
>>  msgid "You seem to have moved HEAD. Not rewinding, check your HEAD!"
>>  msgstr ""
>> -"Sie scheinen HEAD verschoben zu haben. Keine Zurücksetzung, prüfen Sie HEAD."
>> +"Sie scheinen HEAD verschoben zu haben. Keine Rückspulung, prüfen Sie HEAD."
>
> Maybe "Sie scheinen HEAD veraendert zu haben" here?
> This could also be reflected in the code and we put "changed HEAD" ,
> but in English it seems to fit "moving " HEAD.
>
>> @@ -11258,7 +11258,7 @@ msgstr "Fortschrittsanzeige anzeigen"
>>  #: builtin/pack-objects.c:2881
>>  msgid "show progress meter during object writing phase"
>>  msgstr ""
>> -"Forschrittsanzeige während der Phase des Schreibens der Objekte anzeigen"
>> +"Forschrittsanzeige während der Phase des Schreibens von Objekten anzeigen"
>
> Maybe elide "der Phase" here?

I agree with all of that.

Thanks

  reply	other threads:[~2017-07-27 18:06 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2017-07-27 17:30 [PATCH] l10n: de.po: various fixes in German translation Ralf Thielow
2017-07-27 18:00 ` Stefan Beller
2017-07-27 18:06   ` Ralf Thielow [this message]
2017-07-27 18:23 ` [PATCH v2] " Ralf Thielow
2017-07-27 19:09   ` Matthias Rüster

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