From bfd60ef4c2eff566481f1e40b18b7c3d1b3e43fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Eric Wong Date: Sat, 2 Jul 2016 22:57:29 +0000 Subject: wwwstream: wording/grammar tweaks in trailer git.git documentation uses "clonable" so that's probably a better term than "clone-able". Also, shorten the section for retrieving our code and remove an obvious typo. --- lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm') diff --git a/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm b/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm index be6ce2e6..285416d5 100644 --- a/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm +++ b/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ sub _html_top ($) { sub _html_end { my ($self) = @_; - my $urls = 'Archives are clone-able:'; + my $urls = 'Archives are clonable:'; my $ctx = $self->{ctx}; my $obj = $ctx->{-inbox}; my $desc = ascii_html($obj->description); @@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ sub _html_end { '
'.join("\n",
 		'- ' . $desc,
 		$urls,
-		'Archived served using code from public-inbox:',
-		qq(\tgit clone $url public-inbox),
+		'Served with public-inbox: '.
+		qq(git clone $url public-inbox),
 	).'
'; } -- cgit v1.2.3-24-ge0c7