From: Kyle Meyer <kyle@kyleam.com>
To: Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net>
Cc: meta@public-inbox.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] README: expand on the GUI non-requirement
Date: Thu, 02 Apr 2020 00:26:14 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <87eet6hgwp.fsf@kyleam.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20200401234054.GA32225@dcvr>
Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net> writes:
> Kyle Meyer <kyle@kyleam.com> wrote:
>> Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net> writes:
>>
>> > Thanks and good point about the run-on sentence.
>> >
>> > "as" could work, I think, the sentence may just be too long.
>> > Perhaps just a separate sentence:
>> >
>> > "communication. Users ..."
>> >
>> > Thoughts?
>>
>> A separate sentence reads well to me. Thanks.
>
> Thanks for the extra eyes, slightly more awake now and it's
> coherent :)
> Pushed as commit ee9d839a137ad4f735e77d6b9e01698c8391006e
>
> Diff inlined anyways for solver SEO:
>
> diff --git a/README b/README
> index a3c1e61c..2412e40f 100644
> --- a/README
> +++ b/README
> @@ -14,7 +14,8 @@ public-inbox spawned around three main ideas:
> use of non-Free services or software.
>
> * Graphical user interfaces should not be required for text-based
> - communication.
> + communication. Users may have broken graphics drivers, limited
> + eyesight, or unable to afford modern hardware.
Sorry, of course I spotted a missing word only after reading it again.
-- >8 --
Subject: [PATCH] README: add a missing "be"
---
README | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/README b/README
index 2412e40f..ae428bcf 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ public-inbox spawned around three main ideas:
* Graphical user interfaces should not be required for text-based
communication. Users may have broken graphics drivers, limited
- eyesight, or unable to afford modern hardware.
+ eyesight, or be unable to afford modern hardware.
public-inbox aims to be easy-to-deploy and manage; encouraging projects
to run their own instances with minimal overhead.
--
2.26.0
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2020-04-02 0:26 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2020-04-01 6:04 [PATCH 0/2] doc: pre-release doc updates Eric Wong
2020-04-01 6:04 ` [PATCH 1/2] README: expand on the GUI non-requirement Eric Wong
2020-04-01 15:30 ` Kyle Meyer
2020-04-01 20:34 ` Eric Wong
2020-04-01 21:33 ` Kyle Meyer
2020-04-01 23:40 ` Eric Wong
2020-04-02 0:26 ` Kyle Meyer [this message]
2020-04-02 5:54 ` [PATCH] README: add a missing "be" Eric Wong
2020-04-01 6:04 ` [PATCH 2/2] doc: update notes and HACKING ahead of 1.4 release Eric Wong
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