From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on dcvr.yhbt.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-ASN: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.2 required=3.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED,BAYES_00, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF shortcircuit=no autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 Received: from localhost (dcvr.yhbt.net [127.0.0.1]) by dcvr.yhbt.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4E3A31F406; Tue, 17 Oct 2023 06:44:32 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=80x24.org; s=selector1; t=1697525072; bh=wOw4qW6lXgzuHVlRJalFOE/wYcSw5JKjopWkYUbRc5I=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:References:In-Reply-To:From; b=xBoN2XR2nSuSOX3pcZARoT1+v5dctucr+7NLhvRMDU/xPswI8nn2iHyLfhVFp+0Tx k5UKEyRONII7q8LOhKPkCDI0frDx7YM0ZRa+TupV7l63VFRQYm3SoekzTxsatJgdTr YVuZaDgLCuHg554cbDstxMJ3/XtXb67omnVGuCQg= Date: Tue, 17 Oct 2023 06:43:18 +0000 From: Eric Wong To: =?utf-8?B?xaB0xJtww6FuIE7Em21lYw==?= Cc: meta@public-inbox.org Subject: [PATCH 4/3] install/README: improve wording Message-ID: <20231017064318.M245732@dcvr> References: <20231016113304.2788497-1-stepnem@smrk.net> <20231016211320.M268439@dcvr> <20231017001619+0200.395012-stepnem@smrk.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit In-Reply-To: <20231017001619+0200.395012-stepnem@smrk.net> List-Id: Štěpán Němec wrote: > https://grammarhow.com/or-vs-nor/ Thanks, that's better than the results that were at the top for me. > >> Files in this directory are designed for: > >> > >> -* users using from git or tarballs (and not the OS package manager) > >> +* users using git repo or tarballs (and not the OS package manager) > > > > I wonder if: > > > > * users using our code from git or tarballs (and not the OS package manager) > > > > ...is better. I always feel the need to clarify git the software > > vs. our code repo vs. our mirror on public-inbox.org/git *shrug* > > Yeah, I agree that's better. Maybe also change "using" to > "running"? "Users using" is a bit awkward. Agreed. How about: ----------8<--------- Subject: [PATCH 4/3] install/README: improve wording Reported-by: Štěpán Němec --- install/README | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/install/README b/install/README index 981e014b..dd652552 100644 --- a/install/README +++ b/install/README @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ TL;DR: sudo ./install/deps.perl all Files in this directory are designed for: -* users using from git or tarballs (and not the OS package manager) +* users running our code from git or tarballs (and not the OS package manager) * lazy users who can't be bothered to read all of INSTALL