From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on dcvr.yhbt.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-ASN: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.0 required=3.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED,BAYES_00 shortcircuit=no autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from localhost (dcvr.yhbt.net [127.0.0.1]) by dcvr.yhbt.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 06E101F728 for ; Sat, 2 Jul 2016 22:57:30 +0000 (UTC) From: Eric Wong To: meta@public-inbox.org Subject: [PATCH] wwwstream: wording/grammar tweaks in trailer Date: Sat, 2 Jul 2016 22:57:29 +0000 Message-Id: <20160702225729.2680-1-e@80x24.org> List-Id: git.git documentation uses "clonable" so that's probably a better term than "clone-able". Also, shorten the section for retrieving our code and remove an obvious typo. --- lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm b/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm index be6ce2e..285416d 100644 --- a/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm +++ b/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ sub _html_top ($) { sub _html_end { my ($self) = @_; - my $urls = 'Archives are clone-able:'; + my $urls = 'Archives are clonable:'; my $ctx = $self->{ctx}; my $obj = $ctx->{-inbox}; my $desc = ascii_html($obj->description); @@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ sub _html_end { '
'.join("\n",
 		'- ' . $desc,
 		$urls,
-		'Archived served using code from public-inbox:',
-		qq(\tgit clone $url public-inbox),
+		'Served with public-inbox: '.
+		qq(git clone $url public-inbox),
 	).'
'; } -- EW