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From: "Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com>
To: git@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Lawrence Siebert <lawrencesiebert@gmail.com>,
	Denton Liu <liu.denton@gmail.com>,
	Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>, Taylor Blau <me@ttaylorr.com>,
	Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.email>,
	Philippe Blain <levraiphilippeblain@gmail.com>,
	Philippe Blain <levraiphilippeblain@gmail.com>
Subject: [PATCH v3 4/6] git-rev-list.txt: tweak wording in set operations
Date: Thu, 09 Jul 2020 02:16:46 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <cf934ddf33e94871bd8b7fcba1c420c89c88e6d2.1594261008.git.gitgitgadget@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <pull.590.v3.git.1594261008.gitgitgadget@gmail.com>

From: Philippe Blain <levraiphilippeblain@gmail.com>

Tweak a sentence to make it a little more readable.

Signed-off-by: Philippe Blain <levraiphilippeblain@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/git-rev-list.txt | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-rev-list.txt b/Documentation/git-rev-list.txt
index aa95334a79..f2b83df2fa 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-rev-list.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-rev-list.txt
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@ given commit(s), but exclude commits that are reachable from the one(s)
 given with a '{caret}' in front of them.  The output is given in reverse
 chronological order by default.
 
-You can think of this as a set operation.  Commits given on the command
-line form a set of commits that are reachable from any of them, and then
-commits reachable from any of the ones given with '{caret}' in front are
-subtracted from that set.  The remaining commits are what comes out in the
-command's output.  Various other options and paths parameters can be used
-to further limit the result.
+You can think of this as a set operation. Commits reachable from any of
+the commits given on the command line form a set, and then commits reachable
+from any of the ones given with '{caret}' in front are subtracted from that
+set.  The remaining commits are what comes out in the command's output.
+Various other options and paths parameters can be used to further limit the
+result.
 
 Thus, the following command:
 
-- 
gitgitgadget


  parent reply	other threads:[~2020-07-09  2:17 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 23+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-03-28 21:11 [PATCH] doc: log takes multiple revision ranges Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-03-29  1:34 ` Junio C Hamano
2020-03-30 12:52   ` Philippe Blain
2020-03-30 17:09     ` Junio C Hamano
2020-07-05 20:42     ` Philip Oakley
2020-07-07 13:08       ` Philippe Blain
2020-03-31 21:53   ` Taylor Blau
2020-07-03  3:38 ` [PATCH v2 0/4] doc: include git rev-list description in git log doc Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-03  3:38   ` [PATCH v2 1/4] git-log.txt: add links to 'rev-list' and 'diff' docs Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-07  0:55     ` Junio C Hamano
2020-07-07 13:11       ` Philippe Blain
2020-07-03  3:38   ` [PATCH v2 2/4] git-rev-list.txt: move description to separate file Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-03  3:38   ` [PATCH v2 3/4] git-log.txt: include rev-list-description.txt Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-03  3:38   ` [PATCH v2 4/4] rev-list-description.txt: fix Asciidoc syntax Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-07  0:59     ` Junio C Hamano
2020-07-07 13:12       ` Philippe Blain
2020-07-09  2:16   ` [PATCH v3 0/6] doc: include git rev-list description in git log doc Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-09  2:16     ` [PATCH v3 1/6] git-log.txt: add links to 'rev-list' and 'diff' docs Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-09  2:16     ` [PATCH v3 2/6] revisions.txt: describe 'rev1 rev2 ...' meaning for ranges Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-09  2:16     ` [PATCH v3 3/6] git-rev-list.txt: fix Asciidoc syntax Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-09  2:16     ` Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget [this message]
2020-07-09  2:16     ` [PATCH v3 5/6] git-rev-list.txt: move description to separate file Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget
2020-07-09  2:16     ` [PATCH v3 6/6] git-log.txt: include rev-list-description.txt Philippe Blain via GitGitGadget

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