Hi,

On Tuesday 17 April 2018 03:56 AM, Christian Couder wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> On Mon, Apr 16, 2018 at 5:07 PM, Kaartic Sivaraam
> <kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> That said, I read the draft and found it good except for two minor issues,
> 
> Thanks for your comments!
> 

You're welcome!

I'm sorry to say that I read only part of the draft  when I sent my
previous email though I accidentally didn't mention it explicitly.

Now that I have read the draft completely I find a few typos in the
"Developer Spotlight: Jiang Xin" section:

1.
"... because I feel it is hard to track changes of GitHub UI and the
book will become obsolte very quickly."

obsolte -> obsolete


2.
"We also developped ..."

developped -> developed


On seeing the section "Light reading" to be empty, I thought I could
suggest something. I'm not sure whether you take Stack Overflow answers
for a light reading but I found the following answer to be interesting,

https://stackoverflow.com/a/6521223/5614968

That's all.

-- 
Kaartic

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