From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.2 (2018-09-13) on dcvr.yhbt.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-ASN: AS53758 23.128.96.0/24 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.7 required=3.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN,FREEMAIL_FROM, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI, SPF_HELO_PASS,SPF_PASS shortcircuit=no autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.2 Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by dcvr.yhbt.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id A0B451F8C6 for ; Tue, 31 Aug 2021 13:36:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S234273AbhHaNhw (ORCPT ); Tue, 31 Aug 2021 09:37:52 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:53014 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S232909AbhHaNhv (ORCPT ); Tue, 31 Aug 2021 09:37:51 -0400 Received: from mail-ej1-x62b.google.com (mail-ej1-x62b.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::62b]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 13C03C061575 for ; Tue, 31 Aug 2021 06:36:56 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-ej1-x62b.google.com with SMTP id x11so38929581ejv.0 for ; Tue, 31 Aug 2021 06:36:56 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=CR/PcUGVKtW3Z/V+Tlgqr66RYtV5MfdvpSu2jucPkkg=; b=RAj1z0O4bOifJvrq0HIO6QZiQx3dythyqd5oTgdhyIe0vYfstdhqoYdva3hH7xCfJA KnmreY1wfWm9UbDrDcSEAYa/RmjrN96CMQa7hlpJEy4/Gda4aDgEEJHnQgFmCRzqs44G tQeETq5mzEecJyNzO1YUXjRxxGXcyrzt2acEYBVNrt/C+Al+XGaknMiUQwl1Qt+9VXM7 Xtr6MfyheAm0zRolk9YpU7B8QM62jj+GmnpVU5qFf3IanTjjHVikVIGWrtIDED4grjp4 ezpitd9Gu2h19/5TuttwfZfDjTmdHSmjgBppZ6oYbebz8MsOrEj5f0LB8/fLAlaagRgV ncjA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=CR/PcUGVKtW3Z/V+Tlgqr66RYtV5MfdvpSu2jucPkkg=; b=tuxlPCY/ABCMdo7Sw0Sm6CvO5uBYflLWlNn7SOzfptf/UbxLpfekFViMucG7MY1KEY OCqhQRr/3rQSi6vjl2ZUd244TNPmBUWGI0fAuSzqoVhdi5hxYrh2mF3Pb2jQrNonnOHr d10Z2MFmpXs1dvIUES9wEKiYTHCI4BXQ84MRSMgnqAbRO9aWFlfRumP5M6rT1Wivrdfm 8eTDZELm0p1FgLL6Ag0+kg46GOl1gYVN7KgiG3kt5o7fqfPHlRSE1vRh95YjGTsGCB5o 4PpOoFVTU1TymaY2rPyHcjJn8MjT9XYfXLrkcm/WMUAbH5o62LyrBEqQU5IHoEkG3WRm 1A/g== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM530hsEPgOqNeEnPH1p6h6KC6mBpfX8FH9bZ8HYWl1aMnILNjPT8n w1jTeqqFTM4JzVyxdVjCyIltteiy8PNIeRip/BQ= X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJwX2MtNxP68qSTmuu3p468oV3KpOQ66TmLhDXhgiXG93HOb+DyHVsi+xyISWQ7/4w1MpcZxnHlDmlzci4Kuemo= X-Received: by 2002:a17:906:4784:: with SMTP id cw4mr30661937ejc.160.1630417014645; Tue, 31 Aug 2021 06:36:54 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 References: In-Reply-To: From: Christian Couder Date: Tue, 31 Aug 2021 15:36:43 +0200 Message-ID: Subject: Re: Draft of Git Rev News edition 78 To: Markus Jansen Cc: git , Junio C Hamano , Jakub Narebski , Kaartic Sivaraam , Jeff King , Johannes Schindelin , Elijah Newren , Taylor Blau , =?UTF-8?Q?Martin_=C3=85gren?= , German Lashevich Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org On Sun, Aug 29, 2021 at 11:36 PM Markus Jansen wrote: > > Tried to sort out tenses in the story, and added my usual tiny amount of correction suggestions in 34d65d4. > As usual, feel free to further correct/revert/rephrase etc. Thanks for the fixes! They LGTM! > I like the backreferences to past editions, which I regard being a build-up mechanism for a collective/community memory :-). Yeah, it's a balance between making things more useful without making the text harder to read. But I think so far the result has been positive.