From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.2 (2018-09-13) on dcvr.yhbt.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-ASN: AS31976 209.132.180.0/23 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.9 required=3.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN,FREEMAIL_FROM, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3,RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_NONE shortcircuit=no autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.2 Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by dcvr.yhbt.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 663DC1F487 for ; Wed, 25 Mar 2020 18:03:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1727280AbgCYSD6 (ORCPT ); Wed, 25 Mar 2020 14:03:58 -0400 Received: from mail-vs1-f65.google.com ([209.85.217.65]:40114 "EHLO mail-vs1-f65.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1726820AbgCYSD6 (ORCPT ); Wed, 25 Mar 2020 14:03:58 -0400 Received: by mail-vs1-f65.google.com with SMTP id d18so2111402vso.7 for ; Wed, 25 Mar 2020 11:03:57 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :content-transfer-encoding; bh=8UXVQCFMrZT7ZSKml7MdWI2mD4gVI8QU/JB8BYxvsG8=; b=nB4F8rBubdogHexei1q1vVTKpXYhAQDrIw4+TDwv87TNofLeq+9CewmvMOebiIrT4n NSIpkxAVqtrso4GmynyIwNVApSMxDF/Y7LxgF1LlU1RyJP3Yv/rlsY+0gzpLSD7v5fCZ zNnv6S5uSh5tu/jVy+wqK+7NMbtpK5agMgjGfuDg3HlITcQLpJ++5r6oV7SaKCol6ORt nAWaGz1bNKkTUwBYgQ6aZVnni5gTa+C66MxnYHiglAZOiTueDn9RRjMPCffXsNNE3BVb pLnGHrMMRGq8EuWRXxpxrNjS7loqvcuROodJpp1feH/c/vEnxNgsClxyF9Ilx/tpcQvX nptA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:content-transfer-encoding; bh=8UXVQCFMrZT7ZSKml7MdWI2mD4gVI8QU/JB8BYxvsG8=; b=hFoH0RC2GkCClMWsL4uf/lIX+7z+sAhxUPSqGODUNiWxPgX7fIi9292Hox7A3/Q6Mq 67AchEMOJX3er1DMTbuLluTT48KGBDNRKxgdIiyWKD5tCKmb45rk5cRSM70Wupfw9t79 QdEyT2DVg6MsiWWErNH0GDWL9ahwzjWzCiK5SBA17CKx1iWIun3gwa41feJpJUBFDMjx yKK7kRwipExsxWH5mysjwnr7zDUpkbm+nim5q4Q1+FsFSHBqRjQUBBeo34iDzone1DnV LaIeKMAZbc6YdrE7onsgMP4Iw5iwBfcs1oJ5l8aQD9cgdOFHBYXBx956F70UZxDRjmjr B2kQ== X-Gm-Message-State: ANhLgQ0nI+WCsUYgadL+z04/foIuDfiN6FifxWwIjUioYuzQH1elJyD3 8OJjVePN+wqkswAOo+Uk7JUuGsXYUMvQCoz6WKM= X-Google-Smtp-Source: ADFU+vvSlH91vUucfSMAhHcri4dTLQx/Cre+xj17t9PQmEIxhrhSkwh80qkuL1F4YssF46+f4+tH2VvRljRfRs/ZFbs= X-Received: by 2002:a67:cb84:: with SMTP id h4mr3739599vsl.85.1585159436648; Wed, 25 Mar 2020 11:03:56 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <20200325013434.219775-1-sandals@crustytoothpaste.net> <20200325013434.219775-2-sandals@crustytoothpaste.net> <20200325110328.GK6499@camp.crustytoothpaste.net> In-Reply-To: <20200325110328.GK6499@camp.crustytoothpaste.net> From: =?UTF-8?Q?Martin_=C3=85gren?= Date: Wed, 25 Mar 2020 19:03:45 +0100 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] docs: add a FAQ To: "brian m. carlson" , =?UTF-8?Q?Martin_=C3=85gren?= , Git Mailing List , Emily Shaffer , Junio C Hamano , Shourya Shukla Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org On Wed, 25 Mar 2020 at 12:03, brian m. carlson wrote: > > On 2020-03-25 at 06:23:49, Martin =C3=85gren wrote: > > On Wed, 25 Mar 2020 at 02:37, brian m. carlson > > I read this as: > > > > How do I prevent users from making "certain changes with hooks"? > > > > As opposed to your intended meaning: > > > > How do I (with hooks) prevent users from making certain changes? > > > > I'm not suggesting the latter as a "fix" for this "problem" though, > > since it's a bit clumsy. How about adding a comma: > > > > How do I prevent users from making certain changes, with hooks? > > > > Or maybe just dropping those last two words. > > > > Please trust your judgement on whether this is a problem, and if so, ho= w > > to go about addressing it -- I know you have lots of such judgement. > > How about, "How do I use hooks to prevent users from making certain > changes?" That seems to both read smoothly and avoid the misplaced > modifier. Very nice. Martin