Re: [PATCH 1/8] Doc/gitsubmodules: split a sentence for better readability

[Stefan Beller <sbeller@google.com>]

On Sat, Jan 6, 2018 at 4:29 PM, Eric Sunshine <sunshine@sunshineco.com> wrote:
> On Sat, Jan 6, 2018 at 1:46 PM, Kaartic Sivaraam
> <kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Signed-off-by: Kaartic Sivaraam <kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com>
>> ---
>> diff --git a/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt b/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt
>> @@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ The `gitlink` entry contains the object name of the commit that the
>>  The section `submodule.foo.*` in the `.gitmodules` file gives additional
>> -hints to Gits porcelain layer such as where to obtain the submodule via
>> -the `submodule.foo.url` setting.
>> +hints to Gits porcelain layer. For example, the `submodule.foo.url`
>> +setting specifies where to obtain the submodule.
>
> I don't find the original difficult to read (aside, perhaps, from the
> missing comma before "such as"), so I don't feel strongly about this
> change.

Seconded. I am neutral to this change, but as you were keen enough to
come up with the patch, I see no reason to reject it.
Anyway, let's read on!

Thanks,
Stefan

>
> However, since you're touching this, you could apply the s/Gits/Git's/ fix.