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From: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
To: Denton Liu <liu.denton@gmail.com>
Cc: Git Mailing List <git@vger.kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] git-submodule.txt: fix AsciiDoc formatting error
Date: Fri, 13 Sep 2019 11:03:39 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <xmqqk1acdqf8.fsf@gitster-ct.c.googlers.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <796a25ee1e9a9c0421d42ab6644e81d23a9bd99b.1568142486.git.liu.denton@gmail.com> (Denton Liu's message of "Tue, 10 Sep 2019 12:09:18 -0700")

Denton Liu <liu.denton@gmail.com> writes:

> Remove surrounding parentheses so that the "index term" syntax is not
> triggered (and because it looks nicer without them anyway ;) ).

"Correct" always trumps "nicer", though ;-)

The $USAGE string in the script describes the available options to
this subcommand like so:

    or: $dashless [--quiet] set-branch (--default|--branch <branch>) [--] <path>

which is, "you can give either --default or --branch <branch>, but
not both".  What the original, if there were no special meaning in
double-paren, meant to say seems to (almost) match that.

> -set-branch ((-d|--default)|(-b|--branch <branch>)) [--] <path>::

I say "almost", as it gives a wrong impression that you can give
"-b" without "<branch>" X-<.

Now what does the updated text say to us?

> +set-branch (-d|--default)|(-b|--branch <branch>) [--] <path>::

I think the attempt to cram the short-form is unnecessarily
cluttering and making the result incorrect.  How about doing
something like this instead?

 Documentation/git-submodule.txt | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
index 0ed5c24dc1..816baa7dd0 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-submodule.txt
@@ -173,10 +173,12 @@ submodule with the `--init` option.
 If `--recursive` is specified, this command will recurse into the
 registered submodules, and update any nested submodules within.
 --
-set-branch ((-d|--default)|(-b|--branch <branch>)) [--] <path>::
+set-branch (--default|--branch <branch>) [--] <path>::
 	Sets the default remote tracking branch for the submodule. The
-	`--branch` option allows the remote branch to be specified. The
-	`--default` option removes the submodule.<name>.branch configuration
+	`--branch` option (or its short-form, `-b <branch>`)
+	allows the remote branch to be specified. The
+	`--default` option (or its short-form, `-d`)
+	removes the submodule.<name>.branch configuration
 	key, which causes the tracking branch to default to 'master'.
 
 summary [--cached|--files] [(-n|--summary-limit) <n>] [commit] [--] [<path>...]::

  reply	other threads:[~2019-09-13 18:03 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-09-10 19:09 [PATCH] git-submodule.txt: fix AsciiDoc formatting error Denton Liu
2019-09-13 18:03 ` Junio C Hamano [this message]
2019-09-13 22:09   ` Denton Liu
2019-09-13 23:13     ` Junio C Hamano
2019-09-16 18:19 ` [PATCH v2] " Denton Liu
2019-09-16 19:25   ` Junio C Hamano

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